So after i made "The What's Left Over After" (the piece that i made the hypermedia for) i recieved the comment (multiple times from multiple people) that they enjoyed the piece, but wished that it could be "clearer" - to paraphrase one comment, that sections of the piece were like rich chocolate cake, but all of the parts of the piece pushed together became overfilling and overrich - in need of editing. This made me think about previous pieces, upon which i realized that most of the feedback i was getting was that my pieces needed editing, and could be much "better" if i stoped tryting to make epic work, and instead concentrated on honing my craft and construction.
Now, let me just make it clear, that i 100% respect and 98% agree with that feedback. I make too much. It needs editing. If i could make less and hold myself to editing, it would, most likley, be "better" (let's say, in the eyes of those who judge what's "good" in postmodern/contemporary modern dance as of right now).
BUT. It brought up a lot of issues for me about the ways in which we as choreogrpahers are asked and taught to make dances; what we are taught is "good" work. A few big paradoxes came to mind, the biggest concerning clarity and the role of the audience:
When i was younger (and a little in college too), i was always instructed to not think too much about the audience. That, if i was to make good work, i needed to follow my heart and really craft what i wanted to make from my heart to your (the audience's) eyes. I'm sarcastic, but that's what i was being told. But at the same time, i was being told that i had to follow a set of structures and rules that would make the work "clear" "interesting" and "watchable" for the audience. The goal was to make somthing that wouldn't be entirely overwhelming for the audience, rather, enjoyable and entertaining. After all, we make the work for the audience. The paradox being: make the work for the audience, but make what you want to make from your heart, but make it clear and enjoyable. What if what's in my heart is complex and epic? What if it's unwatchable? Here's when people started telling me that maybe i wasn't really a choreogrpaher and that i wanted to try other art forms.
But the question still held for me: if what's in my heart is NOT compatible with the clarity that i'm being asked to deliver, then what happens if i (as well as anyone else who feels similarly) puts all that energy we've been expending molding our visions into clarity, into simply letting what we have be what it is, and finding ways to help veiwers (who have likewise been trained towards simplicity) access it?
SO. In my early grappling with these notions, i started calling the work that i felt i was being asked to make (for the audiece, but 100% from your heart, but clear) a "simple piece" and the idea of what would be possible to make if we redirected our focus/thinking a "complex piece".
Let me just say, my bad.
I did not mean to imply that work being made now was simple, nor mine vastly complex. I did not mean to offend, and i certianly didn't mean to say that i didn't see the complexity at play within every single dance created. In many cases, the pieces that seem the most simple and clear and the hardest to make and the by far the most internally complex. I know (and after last semester, have proved) that i can not and will not make a piece that is clear and simple to view, becuase it is too hard, and i lack those specific skills as a creator.
So where are those ideas now? (Jeremy, the world, wants to know!)
Actually, i've kind of rejected the idea of simplicity, especially under that name. Nothing nothing nothing is simple. However, i AM still interested in the idea of CLARITY, and how it has been constructed in our learning of modern dance and choreogrpahy.
In senior seminar this year, Sara always asked us what we were "assuming" in our work. Are we assuming that the dancers always start offstage? Do we assume and reassume that a piece is always to music? These sorts of things. Well, i feel that contemporary dance assumes many things:
- the work will generally be between five minutes and "evening length"
- the work will not be unwatchable
- the work will involve bodies, onstage, moving/not moving, and music/no music
- the work is performed for an average of two nights, or on tour
- the work is generally ephemaral
- the work will be clear enough that in one veiwing, the audience will be interested/intriqued/entertained enough to a) want to see the piece again, b) want to see the company again, c) donate money to the company, or d) tell a friend to see the show
etc, etc, etc. There are more, and of course all of these have major exceptions (especially here in postmodernism) but these are the ones that stick out to me. To me, this is how the dance world seems to function, and whether this is due to economic factors or artistic theories or the Will of the Muse (or all of them, which, it is) this is how we are being taught and teaching ourselves what dance is.
It isn't that we're teaching ourselves "this is good dance, this is bad dance" (even though we are.) It's that we're being taught, "This is dance, this isn't."
So that's my little rant. As you can see, i'm still very much engaged with the idea of clarity and the idea of questioning that, even if i've givin up the monolithic (and i think not really real) ideas of "simple" and "complex". Everything is both. It's seeing what we're assuming that's interesting to me now.
Personally, i'm interested in trying to create dance along the lines that Joyce wrote Ulysses. Create something that is compleatly on your terms. Create something that is too much, too dance, unread/watchable. Create something with a new language and old structures. Create somthing that must be studdied intensley for any understanding to be reached, yet is at the same time intensley provocative and moving and beautiful. Create a work that people will spend their entire lives studying, and still profess to not compleatly understand. AND. Create a study guide that goes with it.
No dance like that has been created, not that i've seen or heard of. So that's what i'm interested in making.
As always, questions welcome.